something pretty...

[shorti_blaze]

This is something i worked on in photoshop.... i took the photos used to make it... so its all mine ... and yea.. thats me...

n e ways... i havent really thought of a title for it.. but i "what is she waiting for?" is kind of what i think when i look at it... but ne ways.. tell me what you think ... i love to be critiqued.. so have go ahead (unless you're going to tell me the right arm is ****ed up.. because im aware of that *grrr* still working on tha tpart! ) took me probably four hours... maybe more.. who knows!!!

[Dillweedshake]

Very nice!! At first I thought somewhat peaceful like, but with some dark undertones. But when I took a deeper look and saw the expression on your face, I thought "I'm shorti and I'm taking over this World" .....nice job so far!

[fishwood]

Good work, there is very little I can find to fault it. The clouds might be a little too saturated towards the bottom of the picture.

My other suggestion is simply conjecture and is really just a matter of personal opinion. I would like some colour to enchance the focal point. I was thinking perhaps cropping a square around the top right corner of the picture and giving colour to the eyes only.

Keep up the good work, it is looking very proffesional!

[GibtheGamer]

Nice job... looking good... erm... the picture, not you... wait... that didn't sound right either... crap... LMFAO


Looks good, shorti. I like your scheme. Doesn't need a whole lot of work, just a little refinement if that's what you want.

[shorti_blaze]

thanks thanks thanks you guys!!! ... i dont want to add more color.. because i wanted it to blend... make the person blend with the same mood as the clouds... stormy and such.. moody.. troubled! right?.. lol so yes... thanks you guys!! i'll make sure to bring more of my art here some time! hehe

[Dillweedshake]

So you are saying you're stormy and moody!......jk..

[shorti_blaze]

kind of... but just in general pissed off....lol

[tonilovekelly]

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